Ten One-Liners from Sequioa-Backed Pitch Decks
Introduction
Next week I’ll be pitching to a room of angel investors with Startup&Angels, and it got me thinking about SquareBySquare’s one-liner. I’ve been playing with:
“Tiny Squares, Big Impact”
“Radically democratising rainforest protection”
“Simplifying Nature-based Investing”
“Empowering everyone to invest in nature”.
None of these quite capture what I want to say, and after watching this brilliant (UTTERLY brilliant!) video by SuperSeed VC founder Dan Bowyer about pitching, I decided to look at other tech startups that successfully raised early funding for inspiration.
Why a Single Sentence Matters
- Clarity: A concise statement forces you to strip away jargon and focus on your core value. If you can’t explain what you do in everyday language, it’s unlikely your investors, customers or partners will grasp it either.
- Memorability: Humans are wired to remember short, punchy lines. Think of “Just do it.” or “Think different.” These slogans stick because they’re simple, bold and to the point.
- Alignment: When everyone on your team knows exactly what that sentence is, you have a north star, and marketing campaigns, product roadmaps and sales pitches all stay aligned with your central mission.
Ten One-Liners from Sequoia-Backed Pitch Decks
Below are ten tech startups, each of which attracted Sequoia’s support in their early rounds, and the single sentence they used to define themselves.
- Airbnb (2008)
“Book rooms with locals, rather than hotels.”
Puts the alternative to hotels front and centre, immediately suggesting a new kind of travel experience.
2. Uber (as UberCab, 2008)
“Ubercab proposes a next-generation on-demand car service using mobile technology, aimed at urban professionals in cities like San Francisco and New York.”
Lands the problem (hailing a reliable ride) and the solution (mobile-driven service) in one go.
3. Dropbox (2007)
“Moving the world’s files.”
Ambitious yet relatable: everyone moves files, and this promises to make it effortless.
4. YouTube (2005)
“YouTube is a consumer media company where people can watch and share original videos online worldwide.”
Why it works: Defines the platform, the activity (watch and share), and the scope (global) all in one line.
5. Square (2009)
“Square provides merchants with a free card reader that plugs into smartphones and tablets, allowing them to accept credit card payments with low fees of 2.75% per transaction.”
Explains the hardware (card reader), the software (phone-based), the audience (merchants) and the fee model, succinctly.
6. WhatsApp (2009)
“WhatsApp is a cross-platform mobile messaging app that allows users to exchange messages without SMS charges.”
Clearly states the platform, feature (cross-platform messaging) and main benefit (no SMS fees).
7. DoorDash (2013)
“Hi, we’re DoorDash, and we enable every restaurant to deliver.”
Friendly, direct and mission-driven. Everyone immediately knows the who, what and why.
8. Instacart (2012)
“Instacart is a same-day grocery delivery service that delivers in as little as an hour.”
Highlights the promise: groceries at your door within the hour, and sets the expectation clearly.
9. Coinbase (2012)
“Your hosted Bitcoin wallet”
It’s ultra-concise, tells you exactly what Coinbase does (hosts and secures your Bitcoin for you), and instantly signals the core benefit: easy, managed access to digital currency without the hassle of running your own wallet.
10. Pinterest (2011)
“Pinterest is a very early-stage Palo Alto-based company with a social e-commerce website that lets users in its community curate catalogues of products and discover products by following tastemakers.”
It names the format (social e-commerce), the activity (curation and discovery) and hints at the network effect (following tastemakers).
Source: Bessemer Venture Partners
How to Craft Your Own Single Sentence
- Identify the core problem. What pain point am I solving? If you can name the pain, you’re halfway there.
- State your solution. Follow with: How do you solve it? Be specific — avoid vague phrases like “platform” or “ecosystem” unless you define them immediately.
- Name your audience (if it helps). If your market is niche (for example “urban professionals” or “small-town retailers”), include that to sharpen the focus.
- Emphasise key benefit or differentiator. What makes you unique? Zero fees, AI-powered insights, real-time updates — pick your angle.
- Test and refine. Say it aloud to someone unfamiliar with your space. If they ask follow-up questions that reveal confusion, iterate.
Quick Template
[Company] is a [product/service] that [core action/solution] for [audience], enabling [key benefit].
Or said another way:
“It’s an X (what) for Y (who) that does Z (how/why)”
Feel free to drop components that don’t add clarity. The shorter, the better, as long as you cover the essentials.
Conclusion
Our latest version, using the template above.
Does this single sentence give you a clear idea of what SquareBySquare does? How could we shorten it without losing clarity?
I’d love to hear your thoughts and suggestions!
p.s. some of the sentences above come from slidedecks created by 3rd parties about the companies, rather than the original decks! Apologies for any egregious mistakes!
